I'm sure you were waiting with bated breath, all two of you. Anyway, I have some timeline kinks worked out and am planning on cramming a large amount of happenings into the next two days of fictime. Just FYI, this fic is set on Saturday, November 13, 1999, about two weeks post-batsu, and I'm saying Batsu's events took about a week to happen. (It's important for you to know this later.) Also, I've determined that this fic will be much longer than I originally thought, so. This is chapter 1, and it's almost completed. At the end of the ficchunk, I'll talk a little more about the upcoming end-of-the-chapter scene, as well as a quote from IRC about what I was thinking when I wrote this chunk. (I'd put it here, but it might spoil the scene. >_>)
Anyway, enjoy! This section has absolutely no spoilers and is basically just the three of them bickering for 4 pages. Whee. -_- I hate writing arguing people, but I can't seem to make them stop. Damn the three of them. Without Maya there it's just snipesnipesnipe, bickerbickerbicker. Anyway: things I'd like feedback on are: 1. Do they seem drunk? 2. Is Katsuya angsting too much or too melodramatically or anything like that? 3. the writing is confusing, especially at the end (I was tired and my english skills aren't THAT good), so can you visualize what's going on? I'm thinking I'll illustrate this fic later. ^^ Well. Without further ado...
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